Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Proposal/Script DVP2 MG

DVP2 Final
I looked around the room. Nothing seemed unusual, but then My story is about a young girl doing laundry in her creepy basement. A simple normal routine, but then she hears a noise coming from a dark corner. She passes it off not thinking much of it, but then the noise is louder, and starts to freak her out.

MG Final
I will make an infomercial on sneakers that make you fly. (Compelling Tech Gadget)

DVP2 Final Script

Girl walks down stairs with laundry, headphones in one hear. Nothing is out of the norm. She tries to turn on the basement light but of course, it’s not working. She shrugs it off and goes downstairs anyway. In the corner of the basement there is a noise.

Girl takes off the headphone to listen. Noise is not heard again. She shrugs it off and continues folding laundry. She then hears something move.

Girl: What is that? (Looking around) She walks over carefully, thinking it may be an animal or something.

Camera moves into the dark corner, zooming into the space, you can hear the mysterious noise again, except its breathing heavily.

Girl walks cautiously closer to move a box out of the way.

Girl is grabbed by unknown monster.

Girl: (Screams)

Girl breaks away for a moment but loses her balance and falls. She is shaken, breathing heavily, and looks back to see the creature is coming for her.

Girl (Screams) Please no!!!

Girl is then showed being dragged very quickly into the corner still screaming.

A large SNAP is heard, and screaming ceases.

Camera Zooms into the dark corner again. Nothing can be seen except for a dark silhouette figure of an animal like creature with glowing eyes.

Camera continues to zoom into the eye of the mysterious creature, then fades to black.

MG Final Script Infomercial:
Flying sneakers

Salesman: Hey there America! Are you sick and tired of driving to work in traffic? Are you always late for a family get together? Ever just wish you could fly to the places you need to go? Well now you can with the incredible ___________ !!

Check out these new sneakers by Fairy Co. They are made 100% by magical fairies right here in America.

Consumer: But how do they work?

Salesman: Well my friend let me show you!

Salesman: Just simply take your new shoes and put them on. Make sure you tie them on tight! Now jump, and your off t0 where ever you want to go!!!

Consumer: Wow that was incredible!

Salesman: I know

Salesman: Use your new sneakers to fly to work, spy on your loved ones, fight fires, visit the moon, a little tipsy from last night’s party? DON’T DRIVE, FLY HYOME!!!! Imagine all the things you can do with ____________ sneakers!

Consumer: Now this all sounds great, but how much does it cost?

Salesman: That’s the best part! Get your new flying sneakers for only 72 easy payments of 3.1415926!!!

Consumer: That’s a really strange number?

Salesman: And this is a strange product! But it will be the best investment of your life!!! Grab a pair of your ___________ sneakers today and get flying America!!!!!

Call 1800FairyShu to get your shoes today

First 10 callers get a free fairy with purchase! Not happy with your shoes? No problem! Just send them back and keep your fairy as our gift to you!

***DISCLAIMER Fairy shoe company is not responsible for deaths or accidents cause by flying. Do not fly into restricted air zones. We are not liable if you are shot down by the military. We are also not liable if you are hit by aircraft or struck by lightning. Side effect of ______ sneakers may include rapid heart rate, ground phobia, gambling, divorce, male impotence, and hives. Product has not been tested or approved by the FDA.

Salesman: These shoes won’t be around forever America!!! Call NOW and get your own _____________ sneakers today!!!

The __________ are because I havnt found a name for my sneaker yet.

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